Another "Nada Sonnet" revised
Even whimsy can be improved when it's as bad as this was. I hope it makes more sense now.When Tinkerbell left Peter Pan,no light lit up his life.He grew into a bitter man;bereft and filled with...
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yes...it's Mary's (Nada Lott) new form.read her "Window Magic". I thought what she did with the common meter made her poem magical. I took one of my old tetremeter sonnets and revamped it to fit the...
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I'm honored, Sue. I admire your ability and enthusiasm for innovation. I don't quite understand it, though. Is it possible too much was cut from the other version? How about posting that one too, for...
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Thanks Mary...It's just a silly little ditty...more of an exercise, really,about a flighty girl who leaves her childhood boyfriend devastated when she moves on to other friendships.He throws a...
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Sue-- An enjoyable light-hearted version of an interesting form.The common meter seems appropriate for this child-like (in a good way) verse with the alernating short lines and frequent rhymes.I think...
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Thanks muchly, Liz.I'm glad you enjoyed. S ******************<br>To have great poetry there must be great audiences, --Walt Whitman
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